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Hang Your Head,
Hang It Low,
Keep Your Face,
Below The Light,
Breathe The Air,
In Shallow Breaths,
To Keep Out The Stink,
Of human kind.
©2005-2010 ~WoundedRat
:iconwoundedrat:

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If you can think of a title, note me and I'll give ou credit for it

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:icongenocide-and-candy:
Stain of Existance...

*shrug* I'm not feeling very poetic as of lately so I can't really come up with titles.... that was my best shot.

Anyways, such a short, sweet, and to the point poem like always... bravo.

--
Treat me like the monster I've become...
:iconwoundedrat:
Thanks.

And don't worry about not being very poetic, its a better title than anything I had.
:iconshadowedeyes89:
i think of something like..denial, or shame, like look what we have done to this world. i agree with glennoar, very thought provoking.

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Jillian

"Sacrifice your ego to be a part of something bigger than yourself."
:iconwoundedrat:
Thanks.

I really actualy didnt have anything in mind when I wrote it, I was just not doing anything..

Look where my mind wanders to!
:iconglennoar:
Burial?

It makes me think... Thought provoking.

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-Link

I let the dogs out.

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